в презент континиус написать письмо к другу, тема лето рассказать про погоду. Помогите пожалуйста

UnhappyMonkey: дополнение: I made friends with boys from another town, they have there is very cold

Shaagane1: Рассказ для 5 класса маленький, но все равно спасибо 

Shaagane1: Hi, my dear friend Mike! How are you? Did something new happened in your life? It is summer. The weather is good, Sunny, warm, not windy. I used to go fishing now. I eat apples and other fruits. The summer is great. I made friends with boys from out of town, they got very cold. Hoping to hear from you soon. Your faithful friend name Daniel.

Shaagane1: А если так, проверьте пожалуйста так будет правильно?