Help me!!!!!!!!!!!!!

To begin with I should say that I like Moscow. I like it because it's a big city, becaude I wss born here, all of my friends and my familly live here. In my opinion all of my friends from other towns should go to Moscow and see this city. I hope, they wil like it.In conclusion I should say that despite I like Moscow there are some disadvantages of living here: for example, many traffic jams on roads.