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Dear Julia!
Hi! I am writing to tell you about my day with parents outdoors.
My name is Angelina.
I live in Moscow. The weather is always sunny, positive, favourable.
My city is very beautiful.
Usually my parents and I walk and play outside a lot.
In the centre of the city we can see fantastic fountain. 
We have dinner in the cafe which names "Rainbow".
We like to watch films in the cinema.
What about your day with parents outdoors?
Do you like to walk with your parents? Do you like to spend your time outdoors?
I hope for the best!
Best desire?
Angelina.