Предмет: Английский язык, автор: Гуманитарий2

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it is common knowledge,that a lot of   people prefer living in a big city,but everybody knows,that such lifestyle is harmful for your health,so other people  move to the villages. Which way of lifestyle is better?I personally think, that urban life is more better,than life in a countryside. I think so,because,firstly,there are a lot of possibilities to find a well-paid job. Secondly,Life in city is more interesting,because you can go to the theater,cinema,restaurant or gallery. Thirdly, this way of life is easier. It is very convenient life in a flat. You do not care about hot water,light and gaz.But there are people who think differently. They think that those people who live in the country have a good health. Moreover the air here is fresh and clean and there are not noisy crowds or traffic  jams . In fact  that some people feel lonely and  depressed in a big city.However I cannot support their point of view,because live in village is boring and difficult. In addition it is not simple keeps an economy.In conclusion I would like say that both way of life have advantages and disadvantages. It is more important to get an good education and be a success person.

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It is common knowledge, that a lot of   people prefer living in a big city, but everybody knows, that such lifestyle is harmful for your health, so other people  move to villages. Which way of lifestyle is better?I personally think, that urban life is  better, than life in a countryside. I think so, because ,firstly ,there are a lot of possibilities to find a well-paid job. Secondly, Life in a city is more interesting ,because you can go to the theater, to the cinema, to a restaurant or  a gallery. Thirdly, this way of life is easier. It is a  very convenient life in a flat. You do not care about hot water, light and gaz. But there are people who think differently. They think that those people who live in the country have good health. Moreover the air is fresh and clean  here and there are not noisy crowds or traffic  jams . In fact  that some people feel lonely and  depressed in a big city. However I cannot support their point of view, because life in village is boring and difficult. In addition it is not simple to keep an economy. In conclusion I would like to  say that both ways of life have advantages and disadvantages. It is more important to a good education and be a success person.
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People all over the world are very fond of sports and games. That is one of the things in which people of every nationality and class are united.
The most popular outdoor winter sports are shooting, hun¬ting, hockey and, in the countries where the weather is frosty and there is much snow — skating, skiing and tobogganing. It’s so nice to go to the skating-rink on a frosty sunny day. Some people prefer to be out of town in such weather and to sledge or to ski in the woods. Many people greatly enjoy figu¬re-skating and ski-jumping.
Summer affords excellent opportunities for swimming, boating, yachting, cycling, gliding and many other sports. Among outdoor games football takes the first place in public interests; this game is played in all the countries of the world.The other games that have firmly established themselves in favour in different countries are cricket, volley-ball, basket¬ball, and so on. Badminton is also very popular both with young and old.
All the year round many people indulge in boxing, wres¬tling, gymnastics and track and field events. Scores of young girls and women go in for calisthenics. Over the last few years aerobics has become popular with young girls and women. Aerobics helps them to be slim, healthy and strong. The inte¬rest for it greatly increased thanks to Jane Fonda, a promi¬nent American actress, the founder of this kind of sport. This woman may serve as an impressive example of inexhaustible health, cheerfulness and beauty. Being a great enthusiast of aerobics she has been trying to initiate many women all over the World into this sport.
Among indoor games which one can go in for all the year round are billiards, table tennis, draughts, chess, of course. The results of chess tournamets are studied and discussed by enthusiasts in different countries.
So we have all grounds to say that sport is one of the things that makes people kin.