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Each person has an occupation that he really loves, and it is different for each of us. Hobbies are things we never get tired of. Different Hobbies help us to relax because we enjoy them. As for me, I have a few Hobbies.
My first hobby is paper craft. From papercraft-hobby, which appeared relatively recently. This is a simulation of the paper of various crafts. They are very common in large cities I became interested in it by means of mother and already managed to participate in competition, having won the diploma.
The second hobby-computer games. Sometimes you want to take a break from homework and play computer games. This is very interesting, especially when you play online games. I used to play Lineage 2 and was in good clans. In games, you can talk to people and play with them. Maybe if you get to know them better, you can keep playing together.

My third hobby is listening to music. When I put on my headphones, I dive into another world. Music helps me relax and think about important things. My favorite bands are BTS, Skillet and Nerves.

My fourth hobby is writing fan fiction. I make up different stories for different anime and put them on facbook.
In conclusion, I would like to say that the hobby is very useful and interesting. People should have Hobbies and enjoy life. I hope you'll agree with me.