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I like to look trendy and I spend a lot of money on clothes,jewellery and accessories. My favourite clothes are denim-shorts and T-shirts.
My favourite shoes are sandals and trainers,because it comfortable. My favourite accessories are bracelets and necklaces.

At school I usually wear blouses,jackets,trousers,dresses,skirts white-colored or black because school is establishment where we should wear the strict clothes because it makes children more serious and more disciplined.
At home I always wear dressing-gown,because it cosily.
At a party I usually wear dresses and high-heel shoes.
At the beach I always wear swimsuit.

 

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