WRITING A SHORT STORY “The surprise!” 150 words (I will give u 50 points)

I live with my parents, I have my own room, it has a closet and my personal desk. One day I came home from school and went to my room. I sat down to do my homework, and suddenly my mother came into my room and said that there was a surprise waiting for me in the closet; when I opened the closet, I froze in surprise; there was a puppy in the box. I began to hug my mother with joy and a smile, because she gave me the surprise I dreamed of.