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    1)Once upon a time in Elngland, there were free friends: Nick,Philip and Jackson. 
It was a hot, sunny day so they were playing soccer . The soccer field was near the forest.Philip and Nick were playing against their friend Jackson, because he was a very good soccer player.
   2)Accidentally Jackson kicked a ball too hard. "What have you done loser? Go and get a ball now!"-shouted Nick. And so Jackson ran to the forest and he saw a snake! Jack knew there is no time to panic,so he wasn't making fast movements and he waited. The snake crawled away.
3)Jackson took a ball and ran to other guys. 
-What were doing so long?
-I just couldn't find the ball.

4)So Jack kept his secret to himself 
THE END

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